Tus
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Post by Tus on Aug 13, 2008 1:15:16 GMT -5
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Post by Atrahasis on Aug 13, 2008 5:45:51 GMT -5
Nice! I like the bird pattern.  |
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Post by Johanobesus on Aug 13, 2008 6:57:01 GMT -5
I agree, that bird is lovely!
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Tus
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Post by Tus on Aug 13, 2008 21:11:26 GMT -5
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Post by Atrahasis on Aug 14, 2008 7:21:55 GMT -5
Congratulations on your new release!
It needs windows arund the rim though to look more complete, and the bird pattern is too low contrast to the point that it looks faded. The choice of yellow impulse engines is also problematic for me. The wings look like they had to be more carefully sculpted. Overall I like it, but what I'm saying is that maybe you should have gotten some feedback about it before release.
I remember the days when I worked on something completely by myself and went for a quick release. But these days I take my time and ask my buds here for as much criticism as they can muster. If you like, I invite you here to ask for criticism on your WIP projects.
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Tus
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Post by Tus on Aug 14, 2008 10:26:05 GMT -5
Just so everyone knows, this is atolms model and textures, the only thing i did was map and and add a few textures (impulse engines, warp, bridge, plaz) and adjust a few things in atolms textures a) atolm didn't want windows around the rim b) done on purpose, i wanted a more faded look, has a better feel (this is one of things i adjusted from atolms original textures he sent me in paint.net format) c) Yellow i like  d) Atolms model, he made it the way he wanted it  e) I never release stuff fast |
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Post by Atrahasis on Aug 14, 2008 11:02:10 GMT -5
So that's why it looks like it has kinks to work out. He was just never one to take other peoples' observations seriously, sorry to say.
NOTE: "Kinks" is a subjective term of course, please nobody get insulted over it.
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Post by MarkyD on Sept 18, 2008 7:42:25 GMT -5
very original...  |
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